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Aurora
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 09:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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In chameleon beauty~
she dances across the sky
Through the graduating hues~
of the returning suns rise...
So ethereal the grace~
of her disappearing mists
Like that of an Angels tear~
by God away kissed...
Aurora, men have named her~
in an age before ours gone
She is womans awakening~
true Goddess of the dawn...
Aurora
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Re: Aurora
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 09:56:49 PM AEST
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I am not sure it is intended but as i read this I can see the lightening sheets of the Aurora over the night sky rippling in cosmic dance...A great job of anthropomorphizing The Goddess of Dawn...
I sense it was actually easy for you as your are her Daughter...
PeaceSquared
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Re: Aurora
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 10:58:03 PM AEST
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| A dancing lady, a dazzling mist, I see it all. Very good show, mate. |
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Re: Aurora
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by BSteel on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 12:16:07 AM AEST
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very visceral and real great flow,
well done,
sincerly,
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Re: Aurora
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by wizard on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:21:22 AM AEST
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awesome write.. i love it... Hyperion would be proud!
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Re: Aurora
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by Faust on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:07:20 PM AEST
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The imagery in this poem is EXTREMELY well conveyed. I hope to read more of your work.
Eternally Punished,
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Re: Aurora
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by RLSS on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
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| Very pretty, great mental imagery of somethng fantastical and, at the same time, balanced with nature. |
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Re: Aurora
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by queenofcamelot on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 03:36:09 AM AEST
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this was the first mythology i have ever read i thought it was brilliant i could picture everything you said
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