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I Wanted
Contributed by
Inverted
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Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:25:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Wanted...
I wanted to hold you
I wanted to touch you
I wanted to look into your eyes and promise you the world
I wanted to say that everything is ok, it will all work out
I wanted you to know that you can do anything
I wanted you to know that I would give you everything, that there was nothing I would deny you
I wanted to hold you close whilst you slept
I wanted to feel you own heart beat close to my chest
I wanted you to know there was nothing I wouldn’t understand
I wanted you to know there was nothing I couldn’t forgive
I wanted you to see yourself the way I could see you
I wanted you to shine so bright with love that you would never feel empty
I wanted to rip my own heart out to give to you, to give you love
I wanted to drain my own blood to share with you, to give you life
I wanted to cut myself in two to give you a soul, so that together we would be whole
I wanted to give you every part of me so that you would never feel alone
I wanted to give you the tears I once shed, so that you cry for those who felt pain
I wanted to share this feeling with you...
So that you knew, when I gave you everything, I meant I would love you for eternity.
And I wanted you to know, that when you left, I couldn’t bear the emptiness that spread
Threw me like the cold without you to warm my bed.
You tore me in two, and I never knew how much it would hurt
This pain tonight that seems too much to bear.
I wanted to give you so much
But all I really wanted
Was you.
Neen
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2006-12-08 11:25:05]
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Re: I Wanted
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:51:01 AM AEST
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wow this is very emotional and powerful.. a very sweet and touching write.. beautifully written..
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Re: I Wanted
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 01:45:28 PM AEST
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| i like this one, it is very unique, clever, yet very poweful. in my eyes, i would love to give this poem to someone i love...if only i could. |
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