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Depression
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 07:19:10 AM in AEST
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The sickness is endless
like a punch to the stomach
that refuses to dull
all effort on standing
leaves me weak and shaky
there is no joy, no sorrow
- no emotion
just a silent gallery
- of gruesome pictures
and a hidden heart
- screaming for sleep
to escape from this hell
but I can’t
- I can’t
I’m here, standing still
a boy, weak and silent
unable to escape himself.
8/12/06
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Re: Depression
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by MARYCORTEZ on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 10:46:42 AM AEST
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| greatly written |
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Re: Depression
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 12:52:30 PM AEST
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Ah the growing pains of youth well captured here a very faithful to your self piece of writing, good job. Keep the pen flowing better than any anti-depressant to date...
Thank You for Sharing this...
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Depression
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by one-curly-fry on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 05:22:39 PM AEST
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| Youth? I ain't exactly going through growing pains here... |
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Re: Depression
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 10:20:39 PM AEST
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I like the slightly repetetive style in this, and the parts that are almost like side notes, they add to the interest of this.
Well done, a very descriptive right, one that leaves me thinking 'I know just how that feels'
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: Depression
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:51:51 PM AEST
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| Wow I could not even take a breath while I read this! It is short but powerful and captivating. Each word draws on to the next and it gives a slight picture of what you are going through. You say this is not one of your best, but I say it is in my top 7 favorite poems by you. So take that! Lol. Really truly a great write |
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