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Sexual Glow
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The knees grow so weak
and I slowly melt and sink
down in your space
Arms of steel holding me
caught in your embrace
Your sweet breath I taste
so hungry for your love
Lights all turned down low
This room covered
in our sexual scents
our sexual glow
I am gasping for air
as I soak you all in
You and I, my love
sharing each other's skin
My long brown hair
wrapped tightly in your hand
Your wish baby...
My only command
11-06
Laura Horner
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by shelby on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:32:18 PM AEST
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wooooooo hoooooo Laura you go girl!
A different side of your writing I havent seen and I love it raw steam wooooooooo
Michelle |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 08:22:25 PM AEST
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*fans self*
oh SIS!!!!!! holy heck girl!! This was an absolute
TREAT! So much passion drenched within so few
words. I love it!!! Especially those last two lines ..
a stunning work of sensualness, hun. At it's best!
*hugs*
~MG
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 10:50:49 PM AEST
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Excellent you describe this glorious state of becoming, the union...
A blushing cordon knots ones viscera at a personal glimpse of such moments.
Your ending is shag-a-delicacy of imaginings...
Brava
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 01:38:42 AM AEST
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Laura, you go girl~ woo hoo~ so much said in so little amount of words. Gheez girl, it's already hot here now you've made it even hotter, lol~ Fans go on to top speed, lol.
I loved it thanks so much for posting it~
love n hugs from ur fellow poet & friend,
sue m |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 02:44:49 PM AEST
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wow Laurabean!! such a beautiful steamy write.. Love the flow and the powerful emotion.. you wrote another excellent one.. ENCHANTING!!! keep it up girl!!
Hugs
JENNI |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 05:41:40 PM AEST
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I'm just a quoting fool today, but here I go again...
" There's no sensation to compare w/ this...
suspended animation, a state of bliss..."
~Pink Floyd
When first I heard this, I didn't know they were speaking to the experience of, " Learning to Fly.." but rather did I instantly associate it w/ well...er,um...being ready for a smoke.LOL. Good Job...my skin yet hosts the goose flesh that appeared w/ my appreciation for this piece...as in, "Oooo,aaaw!" & one last...yep, there it is...shiver
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 07:16:55 PM AEST
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Whoa, Laura, seems like more'n work was goin' on with Gary out there in San Diego!!! Kinda loosen the collar type writin' there.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Spike on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 02:56:10 AM AEST
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The censors are having an off day, I'm sure!
You captured the moment so well, Laura. Distilled of its essence it wouldn't have been the same - let's hope the moderators keep away.
S |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by one-curly-fry on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 08:32:54 AM AEST
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Man, I remember what that was like... Poor me - a cold bed has greeted me for the most of this year! The funny thing is, until this moment it was my choice after the pain caused by my ex... now... after reading that, I think I was forgetting the finer details ;-)
Great write!
- Tim |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 12:59:40 PM AEST
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...I'm kinda at a loss for words, wow! This is steamy my friend: full of passion and desire. You bring us in at the creshendo of the love scene, which really makes for a potent impact. The poem portrays vivid imagery and spontaneity. I almost feel a need to look away so I don't catch you both naked. LOL.
Well done my friend
Will |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 11:04:57 AM AEST
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Lucky guy!! I can feel the heat coming off this!!
wooooo very sensual! |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 08:50:12 AM AEST
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Stunning... This was an amazing poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by CuriousitysCat on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:04:23 PM AEST
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Brings many a thought of the fullness, the forgiving, the open, and the vulnerable stages we go through during the different mating rituals that envelope all of us at one time or another.
Awesome!
;]
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Re: Sexual Glow
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 01:10:38 AM AEST
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So I'm a bit late in getting here ... but better late than never ... right ?
Somebody better open a window ... it seems to be gettin a touch warm in here of a sudden. This is most definately worthy of a few more reads ... Laura ... ? You're shmokin !!!!
Nazzy ~ |
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