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The Heavy Sea
Contributed by
honey56
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Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 01:00:07 PM in AEST
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oops
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The heavy sea trembles as
I stand with my back to the
The whistling cold wind,
In the air spaces the smiles
That hide the pain..
From the sunset as it, glisten
Leaving a calmness over the
Open sea..
As the light fades…
I find myself comforted amid
The sea..
I bury my feet in the cool damp
Seashore…
As the cold wind whistles and
The sunset glistens..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2006-12-07 13:00:07]
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Re: The Heavy Sea
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by NDean on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 02:08:38 PM AEST
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Cool Poem
Keep at it
well done |
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Re: The Heavy Sea
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by shelby on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 02:52:41 PM AEST
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This is really a pretty poem. At times it seemed a bit choppy to read but then you were speaking of the sea and I could imagine the words going with a flow like the ocean.
Michelle |
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Re: The Heavy Sea
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 08:56:37 PM AEST
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I have stood on the shores from east coast to west coast of my country and nothing is so magnificent as the Ocean/Sea.
A wonderful write. |
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Re: The Heavy Sea
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by ClayMan on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 02:19:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, very descriptive and emotive. A good read, well written. |
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