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A Neoteric Monadic or Muse

Contributed by pooper on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Lord, I sometimes stop to ponder What hallucinogenic drug you're under What other reason could there be Unless you're trippin on LSD For making such disastrous slips You must be having some bad 'trips' Why else would things be in such a mess Stop putting things to an acid test. Upon a time you chose to speak Have you now then passed your peak? Are your children not attendant? Or, do you take the fifth amendment? C'mon Lord let's hear it now We can't drink of milk from 'sacred cows' Hey! you there in the firmament Do you condone the establishment? Or should we now put our faith In members of our human race? Are you a grown ups security blanket? We're not a child to reward or spank it. C'mon Lord you're losing face We're traveling now in outer space If you don't soon kick your habit Your power goes to those who'd grab it. C'mon now Lord get off the pot Uh, wait I'll give it some more thought. rwCopyright © pooper ... [ 2006-12-07 12:18:51] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments:

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Re: A Neoteric Monadic or Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:06:58 PM AEST
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What a brave rant.. it has a questioning and mad upward glare...Really well done terse effective sentences wrapped around a huge 'nut'
of expression.

I dig man tellin' the Man about the man... (snaps fingers to hidden ryhtyms)

I am sure you will post again soon just to show everyone you were not struck down for such poetic boldness.

Peace
Yang

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