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I saw you

Contributed by Desire69 on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 08:36:53 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I saw you for the first time and i thought i was lost:
Just standing there waiting for your bus, your sexy brown eyes glaring in the sun:
I saw you from afar waiting to see if you would look my way:
But your bus came and you were gone, out of sight and on your way,
Oh how i long just to hear your voice and look into those eyes:
I see you in my dreams now, so many months has past and i feel so close to you:
I saw you standing there waiting for the bus again like you do evey morning, i watch and wait for you to look my way but like always your bus arrives:

I see you everywhere, i can't stop thinking about you:
I want to say hi and get to know you but i'm too afraid, afraid you might not even understand why you have this affect on me, please allow me to introduce myself........

I saw you standing there looking like heaven, i feel tingles all over, i don't want to get rejected so,
I will keep my hopes up high that one day you will see me watching you and finally our eyes will meet,
but you won't get on that bus but in my arms and i will take you to wherever you want to go:
So until that day, I'll stay watching you from a distance.............

TO BE CONTINUE

Copyright © Desire69 ... [ 2006-12-06 08:36:53]
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Re: I saw you (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:12:12 AM AEST
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this is a good write.. i like the flow and its almost like one of those romance movies yet written.. awesome job.. and its a different approach for romance.. great job

JENNI

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