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Forever You Will Be With Me
Contributed by
Lia
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Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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As the moonlight serenades a whisper against the ocean waves
And as a seagull dips her wings into the golden hued salt water
I will wade my bare feet into the cooling undertwo
And I will remember you
As a fog breathes moisture onto the peak of a mountain
And as the snow struggles to find warmth under the heat of the burning sun
I will scrape my barren knees against the rocks
And I will remember you
As the sparkle of raindrops breeze past a rainbow
And as the clouds dip there billowy bodies into the brilliant colors
I will rejoice in the beauty of life
And I will remember you
As you live out your dreams in eternity
And as you hear my cries in the night to you in heaven
I will embrace the peacefullness you have found
Do you still remember me?
Copyright ©
Lia
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2003-02-18 22:20:00]
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:19:25 PM AEST
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Lia,aaww this is so sad,my heart goes out to you! So very touching,yet beautifully done!
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by nebill on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 12:18:58 AM AEST
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This is so moving, I am deeply touched...and I am sure you are remembered.
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:23:47 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful ... I'm sure she is watching you. |
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 04:08:48 PM AEST
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| this is a stunning poem...breathtaking...it is so beautiful...well done...wow... |
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:30:01 PM AEST
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And I'm sure that she remembers you. And I'm sure she smiles down on you from heaven when she reads your kind words. Great write!
Ginnie |
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by CowgirlKid on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:58:57 PM AEST
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| Lia, I'm in tears. How could anyone not remember you after writing that? I am a fond believer that words speak louder (and on more volumes) that actions. This is yet another example! My heart and my prayers are for people like you. |
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Re: Forever You Will Be With Me
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:42:26 PM AEST
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Such tender imagery, with a touch of bittersweet and saddened heart.
Nice write. |
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