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Ony You
Contributed by
devils_denial
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Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 06:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Before you and I met long ago,
I thought I'd never pick myself up from my low,
But all that changed on that miracle day,
You came to me and never went away.
The way your eyes stare into mine,
How you say 'you'll love me to the end of time',
The way your fingers softly touch my face,
No one could match you – not even replace.
Your kisses mean more than the world to me,
The beauty within you that I only see,
The way you protect me – no harm could come,
And when, at our closest, you say 'I'm the one'.
In moments alone when there's no need to speak,
And how you watch me, like an angel, when in your arms I sleep,
How you like your hand to hold onto my own,
And with your words I'm a king on my throne,
When I'm upset you wipe away my tears
And in moments of panic, chase away my fears.
In times of doubt when I thought we would fall,
You came through for me – kept standing tall.
I never thought a love could be so strong
But you came into my life and proved me wrong.
Life is perfection when we are together,
My greatest desire – for us to last forever,
You stand by me through thick and thin,
Inside my heart you'll always stay within,
Without you I'd die – I know you would too,
Forever and eternally – I'll always love you.
By Jay Basey © 2006
Copyright ©
devils_denial
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2006-12-06 06:53:25]
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Re: Ony You
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by devils_denial on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 07:00:05 AM AEST
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meant to write 'Only You'
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Re: Ony You
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 08:59:53 AM AEST
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| oh..what a beautiful write. this is amazing. nicely done. |
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Re: Ony You
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 09:47:10 AM AEST
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| Wow...that was beautiful...I am so glad you found someone like that if only everyone could read this...perhaps they would look a little bit harder before giving up...fantastic write |
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Re: Ony You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:27:46 AM AEST
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beautifullly written!! ENCHANTING!! very well expressed.. I can relate to this now.. i feel this way about my boyfriend and you put the words of how you feel about your love very exquistly.. I love this piece.. its very magical and you can feel the love in it.. awesome job!! again.. ENCHANTING!!
JENNI |
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