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Lost
Contributed by
Mila
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Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 05:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sudden emptiness of lost feelings. Thoughts of nothing that is confusing but also soothing. A feeling of numbness all over the body & no sensation for anything or any hope nor beliefs. A moment of being not in this world but somewhere that is stranded with coldness and darkness that brings tears and sadness. The heart cries out for help but there is nobody to answer, but the heart knows it must go on with or without purpose. The heart will keep on beating but the mind tries to stop it with no reason because it doesn't see any reasoning for it to go on. The mind & soul are filled with sadness & the heart can't stop hurting & the tears won't stop falling. So much pain that it can't separate from what is right & wrong anymore. Just being alive doesn't mean anything anymore, when not knowing why we go on everyday without dreams and devotion of emptiness. Without dedication for something that will lead us to a path for a purpose of life is meaningless & unbearable. Until the moment of not knowing, only patience and possibility are awaiting.
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Mila
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2006-12-06 05:30:36]
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Re: Lost
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:30:43 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. it sounds like your confused on life.. my answer to you is there is always hope.. never give up hope.. and i think you need to find that spark of hope. I enjoyed this piece its very sad and you can feel the sadness.. great job in expression
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Re: Lost
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by jesusfreak on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 12:13:28 PM AEST
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| I am glad you're around. People who feel discouraged and empty realize they are not alone. I dont know if your feeling like that now, but I hope not, and truly you are not alone. Thank you for the poem. |
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