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And Your Thoughts
Contributed by
musicXisXlife
on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 11:57:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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View from above
you're a snowflake
falling, floating
slowly downwards
you see her
happy, laughing
spinning and twirling
hair and skirt out like umbrellas
like in slow motion...
Step by step.
Around and around.
getting closer
you see the sparkle in her eyes
excitement in her laugh
happiness in her movements
And your thoughts
you used to be like that
excited for each day
a reason to wake up
...before.
Now
not driven
no purpose
alone...lonely.
Getting closer,
nostalgia seeps into you
taking over
sadness
pain
thoughts, memories
and then
Black.
Copyright ©
musicXisXlife
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2006-12-05 23:57:54]
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Re: And Your Thoughts
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 01:17:17 AM AEST
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I like it...i don't know why really...but I do ^_^
Write Everything!
Always, Abraham |
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Re: And Your Thoughts
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:56:06 PM AEST
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OMG-Ailish, it's, it's just so wonderful!! I lOve this poem. I think I know what you're getting at.
Love ya babe, keep writing!!!!!!
.::Jess::. |
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Re: And Your Thoughts
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 07:53:52 AM AEST
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| the cycle in life we all find from time to time. The hard part is going past it and find what we misplaced. Giving your words I hope helps. |
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