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basket ball
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 09:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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there is a hollow sound as the ball hits the floor
and a swhoosh as it goes in the net
like music it continues
singing a sweet symphony in my head
sneekers squeek adding a chours to my song
i block out everything but the music
the pounding of my hearthas a solo
leadign up to the final score
the buzzer sounds
stopping the music
and fans cheer as we walk away
in victory
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2006-12-05 21:08:09]
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Re: basket ball
(User Rating: 1 )
by ClayMan on
Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 07:11:33 AM AEST
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| This is good, paints a nice picture in my mind of the game. Like the words and the part about the chorus. |
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Re: basket ball
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by Xjordanary on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 01:16:03 AM AEST
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| i love basketball so naturally i love this.. im no grammer nazi but maybe be a bit less careless on some of your speeling ;) other than that i like it. :) |
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