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I just don't care anymore
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 11:49:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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knock me down
Beat me up
Hit me all you like
I don't care anymore
Pull my hair
Slap my face
Do what you wish
I don't care anymore
Break my spirit
Break my heart
It's all the same to me
I don't care anymore
You've done the worst
So this is nothing
I just don't give a ***** anymore
Love me
Hate me
Hurt me
Hug me
Just please look at me
Can't you see what you've done to me?
Forced to remain emotionless
Forced to fight emotions with every ounce of strength
I want you to see
I want you to look
At what you've done to me
Copyright ©
desolantdreamer
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2006-12-05 11:49:37]
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Re: I just don't care anymore
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 02:31:48 PM AEST
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very powerful write! well done..
this should be more like a song than a poem! |
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Re: I just don't care anymore
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by krittermacc on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 12:53:46 AM AEST
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| WOW! Very Strong poem. One can feel the emotions. |
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