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Alone
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A whisper
A scream
I call out your name
You turn a deaf ear
It's all in vain
Insignificant
Tolerated
It's what I've become
Can't turn back the hands of time
What's happened will not be undone
I've begged
I've pleaded
Can't you see it in my eyes?
You seem not to notice
Now I swallow my cries
Easily forgotten
That thought makes me moan
Surrounded by many
Yet I remain alone.
Copyright ©
Tanna
... [
2003-02-18 20:40:00]
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Re: Alone
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 09:46:21 PM AEST
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| broken down sadness, smile
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Re: Alone
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:06:39 AM AEST
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| good. good write. venkat |
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Re: Alone
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by blain on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 07:26:38 AM AEST
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| i know exactly how u feel... :( |
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Re: Alone
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:25:29 AM AEST
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well the emotion is loud and clear ..can hear the cry of help
well done ...great write
peace be yuor journey
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