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Contributed by
thomasmartinroberts
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Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:42:33 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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how can you take back the promise that you made so long ago? take back the heart you gave me, even if i say no. how can a love just up and die? and the years all be in vain. how can i keep my life together? without the strongest link of my chain. i am bound by the old promise, nothing can break the golden band. not even the divorce you asked for, or the sharpness of your hand. do you think because you asked, for your maiden name back today, til death do us part, if i remember, thats what you had to say. you wounded the spirit that loved you, that cherished your image for years. your absences wont let me forget you , in secret silence and tears. were taught in this world to smother each feeling that once was so dear. but ill know in my heart i once had you , and youll always be ever so near.
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Re: how
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by trini on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:59:46 PM AEST
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strong words.
i really liked this, it got to me. very nice write dear poet. may your heart go in ease.
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Re: how
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by The_View on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 10:12:53 PM AEST
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| Good, good. Though I think I'd like it better with capital letters and whanot. |
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Re: how
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 12:07:44 AM AEST
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Yes those promises not kept. The very beginning caught my attention. This is sad and very emotional. So sorry for your pain.
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Re: how
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:57:46 PM AEST
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wow you can feel the pain in this.. its very expressive and powerful.. and the flow is magnificent.. i really liked the way you just put all the feeling out there in this.. i hope things get better for you.. God bless
JENNI |
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