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One Hell Of A Night
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 06:53:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Copper leaves, and momentary blinks,
The morning dew, chased by the sunlight,
Flameless candles, a picture of us rests upon the mantle,
Naked bodies, interlock in a state of love,
Bubble bath, the two of us travel the same path,
Bear skin rug, two souls become one,
Sparks from the fireplace, the moonlight dances upon your face,
Lost in lust, close your eyes and kiss me love,
Hour after hour the urges become louder,
Body heat, place your hands on my chest,
Sitting on the floor as you mount me once more,
Uncontrollable emotions, like wild animals we rage,
Sweat begins to build, our feelings right now are so unreal,
Head starts spinning, you scream my name,
We're the only ones here, I pull your hair as you draw me near,
Hold me tight, as we collapse, that was one hell of a night.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2006-12-04 18:53:44]
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Re: One Hell Of A Night
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 07:06:57 PM AEST
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Ok I am looking for a fan. Whewwww.
Does sound like one hell of a night.*smiles*
It is pleasing to see you posting your marvelous work my friend.
This is a steamer for sure crafted like a pro.
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Re: One Hell Of A Night
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 07:46:17 PM AEST
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Fans self, my gosh this is steamy and hot~
Overloads with love and passion. You have penned this extremely well~
You might've wanted to add in authors note that fans to be propelling at top speed, lol.
Great write. Thanks for posting it~
warm hugs,
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Re: One Hell Of A Night
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by secretwind on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 10:47:44 PM AEST
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That screaming the name thing
that's so
HOT
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Re: One Hell Of A Night
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 09:29:26 AM AEST
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snow outside my window but is hot in here...a lovely tapestry you have woven with your words
Shari |
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Re: One Hell Of A Night
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 09:33:35 AM AEST
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Pretty steamy... I enjoyed reading this...
This was a really good poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: One Hell Of A Night
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by emystar on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 09:28:49 PM AEST
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Incredibly hot.
Awesome work and I'm sure wife luvs it.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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