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Death by Words and Action of the Heart: I Love You
Contributed by
alison
on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I love you,
As you whisper my name,
I love you
As you keep your mouth shut,
I love you,
As you hold me close,
I love you,
As you push me away,
I love you,
As you say “your all that I have ever wanted”,
I love you,
As you say the very next day, “I don’t know what I want,”
I love you,
I don’t know why it is,
This feeling to deep within,
I don’t know why it’s for you,
This feeling eternal,
I don’t know why we can’t be together,
This feeling killing me slowly,
I don’t know why I thought My heart was through with you,
This feeling as you call my name,
I don’t know why I can’t forget your kiss,
This feeling like heaven on earth,
So you say you want me,
Then turn away,
So you say you care about me,
Then scoff at my face,
So you say you’re for real this time,
Then don’t call me in the morning,
So you say there is nothing coming between us,
Then place your own barriers in the way,
So you say you want me back,
Then how come I don’t believe you,
I love you,
As you break my heart once more,
I love you,
As you take all I had left,
I love you,
As you run me to pieces,
I love you,
As your words bring my death,
I love you,
As you say you miss me,
I love you,
As you walk away,
I love you.
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alison
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2006-12-04 17:28:03]
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Re: Death by Words and Action of the Heart: I Love You
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by Saloni on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:44:33 PM AEST
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wowww!! i must say ur very tolerant!
i knw exactly hw u feel.. n i could be related to it too..
it hurts alot! but u need to move on.. and the problem with these kind of people don't realise ur love.. the way u appreciate them... and care 4 them n it kills..
one day they will regret it hw much u cared.. coz wat comes around goes around too..
just keep strong and keep urself busy... try to forget those moments coz they not worth it no matter how much u cry or die they wnt care abt u or change anything...
i feel for u.. this poem really made me cry..
i love the way u wrote it.. very emotional.. i went through it too.. and i still love him to bits.. its hard to forget but time will heal..
but hey thats life! just take care of urself n keep strong..
lots of prayers for you.. |
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Re: Death by Words and Action of the Heart: I Love You
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by whiteleo1984 on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 07:12:03 PM AEST
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| interesting... hope u figure out love and it works out 4 u |
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Re: Death by Words and Action of the Heart: I Love You
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by one-curly-fry on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 08:08:26 AM AEST
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Gee Alison, this is so loaded. I can say that there are so many parts of it that I can relate to with my last gf. It's such a shame that there seem to be very few of us out there that can give love freely and wholly and at the same time, we tend not to have it returned...
Ppl try and tell me that it's the ppl I choose. I don't believe that because I see it all the time.
As I've said before, my heart is with you!
Great write
- Tim |
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