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The Locket
Contributed by
Saloni
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Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:26:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She wore a locket close to her heart
the kind that carried a picture inside
An image of a boy, brave and young,
their love as sure as the evening tide
A promise made that he'd return one day
their time together could be the last
He kissed her lips one final time
then boarded a ship with a tall oak mast
She waited each day down by the pier
with a lover's hope that he'd come home
Searching the silent sea relentlessly
her days spent quietly watching, alone
There came a day in lands far away
when a hard fought battle was won
A young boy's life ebbed where he lay
under smoke filled skies and setting sun
She'll cry for the boy who'll never return
for the promise that they'd never part
She'll miss the love they shared together
still wearing the locket close to her heart...
Copyright ©
Saloni
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2006-12-04 17:26:00]
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Re: The Locket
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by blindchoice on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:34:45 PM AEST
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| wow. this is verry well writtten. i loved it. it remindes me of my uncle who is now over seas in iraq and got struck my lightning and almost died. im so scared he wont come home. |
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Re: The Locket
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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Oh my sweet angel friend Saloni~ I had tears in my eyes. It pains my heart to read such a tragic story of a lost love. My thoughts and prayers go out to all the victims & families of victims of war~ To all our soldiers out there may you come back safely home to where you rightfully belong with your family & friends~
A heart breaking write filled with emotions that pull at the heart strings. Well done my angel friend.
much love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: The Locket
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 07:46:26 PM AEST
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A work of beautiful art you have posted here. Really touched my heart.
Michelle |
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Re: The Locket
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by lost_in_the_darkness09 on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:41:52 PM AEST
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This poem is awesome, i really felt it.
cause i have lost someone too.
thank you for sharing.
{RAIN} |
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Re: The Locket
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 11:40:10 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful write! so sweet and very sad. Great use of words. good job! |
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Re: The Locket
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by ruthie1983 on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:29:12 AM AEST
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Saloni,
Oh wow, this is great work cuz u can feel the hurt and pain when reading the poem. I thought it was interesting how you wrote is as a story in a poem. Great work. Keep writing! |
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Re: The Locket
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 05:07:15 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully penned, what an enchanting tale! keep writing!
hugs n' love nessa |
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