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On Angel's Breath
Contributed by
Saloni
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Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:17:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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She whispered fears on Angel's breath,
A tale of tears as he neared his quest.
They parted ways like those before,
What could he say, he was off to war.
She sings his name in true love song,
His image remains, she'll not wait long.
In silent nights, she'll pray for him,
On an Angel's breath, she'll kiss the wind.
Copyright ©
Saloni
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2006-12-04 17:17:33]
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Re: On Angel's Breath
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 06:18:24 PM AEST
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My dear friend Saloni this is so sad, yet so beautiful~ Your little amount of words say so much. May time be kind to you and bring back your loved one home from war.
My heart, thoughts and prayers are with you my dear friend. Be strong dearest Saloni sweet angel~
A touching and heart felt poem. Thanks so much for posting it~
with love, hugs and heartfelt prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: On Angel's Breath
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by lost_in_the_darkness09 on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 04:38:51 PM AEST
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this poem is really awesome, and thanks for the comments you gave me, i believe your poetry surpasses mine though.....good luck writing, dont stop..
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