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No More
Contributed by
putteragain
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Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:16:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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in the rain i sit and wait
tear filled eyes nothing can sedate
you lie to me and never show
why must my heart be aching so
madness fills my every thought
this is not the life i sought
wasteful moments have come and gone
i pray you show before the dawn
how many no's must i hear
will the haze inside me clear
now's the time to take my leave
for you i will no more grieve
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putteragain
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2006-12-04 14:16:44]
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Re: No More
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:24:42 PM AEST
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Nice to see you back.
You have not lost your touch with the pen I see.
Beautiful write though so very sad.
Tomorrow is always a new and brighter day hang in there.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: No More
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by NDean on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:35:40 PM AEST
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| Wow. For a poem done in 5 mins its fantastic. Do you write poems to express yourself or do they just randomly arrive at the most inappropriate moments? Anyway. Cool Poem |
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Re: No More
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by Saloni on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:32:07 PM AEST
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| very powerful emotional imaginative poem! i nearly cried when i was reading this! 5***** for the 5 mins! |
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Re: No More
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by catz77 on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 07:01:41 PM AEST
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wow i wonder what you could write in 10 min
nice write
catz |
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Re: No More
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by secretwind on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 11:09:25 PM AEST
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I enjoyed it
well done |
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