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this is me after you

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:22:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



just when I thought I was over you,
an old song we made love to
played and the tears welled up in my eyes
memories of all my pointless cries.

so i held in the tears and shook the memories away
felt so silly that night begging you to stay,
but now i seem glad youve gone
but the memories creep in and i'm done..

how was i so foolish to fall for those lines
or was foolishness the tie the bindes,
heaven help me from wanting you again
thats a battle i know i'll never win.

you were everything to me for a while
now i'm left to force a smile...
it hurts me like hell
but know one will be able to tell

The smile will stay on my face,
and i'm shake off any trace.
that i still love you and need you here
but as i sleep i will feel the tear.

Cuz what i should of said,
will dance in my head
and i know i'll heal in time, but you'll never
you'll never find a better heart than what i had when we were together...




Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2006-12-04 02:22:50]
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Re: this is me after you (User Rating: 1 )
by an3n on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 04:01:55 AM AEST
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i like the thoughts u put on this poem...they re tottaly exactly the kind of thoughts someone thinks at these situations...that makes ur poem more real.


Re: this is me after you (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 08:54:57 AM AEST
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keep strong!!
well written with expressions & emotions
keep posting!


Re: this is me after you (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:36:09 AM AEST
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nicely done...i know this pain all too well,

wiz




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