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Two Mountains Over

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



The night is dark,
and I see no way forward,
two mountains over from the Great Stone Faces
I sit before the fire,gallant in it`s effort to destroy the night
I think of Us, and can not reminisce.

It is colder than I imagined,
and wilder than thought,
the trees seem silent not wanting to disturb me.
I think, if you never are, why will you always be.

Most measure in days and years,
I am pleased with Spring flowers, and Winter`s breath,
another season ends.

If you are thousands of miles above,
maybe drop that mental letter to the sea of trees below.
I should have found a way to go forward,
but its the thought.

It might sound child-like but let me believe
some have carved hearts,
names or initials,
and found someone
when the need so great.
Pick a heart
when all hope is spent
a little miracle to save it.

In this letter is good will,
set as the sail
on a small wooden ship
bound for a mile, or a far off sea.

Two mountains over from the Great Stone Faces
Winter diamonds grace a path.
I have knelt beside crystal edges,
dark pools, where the waters begin.

Rest my hands
as the river takes her
believe"
that kind word is sent on it`s way......Crow

Black Hills, So Dakota






Copyright © crow ... [ 2006-12-03 22:27:10]
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Re: Two Mountains Over (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:39:42 PM AEST
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I think at certain moments the distance made no difference because the connection always remained. * sigh*

The feeling cannot be described after reading this. Words painted upon the pallet of stone face hills.... ahhhhhh

~Michelle~


Re: Two Mountains Over (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 11:07:33 AM AEST
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beautiful

Shari


Re: Two Mountains Over (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:36:45 PM AEST
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From the Badlands to Crazy Horse there is an amazing energy in them hills. This has the lyric of a magical ballad.

Bravo & Blessings

Peace
Yang




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