|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
reborn is the demon
Contributed by
tin
on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
about to lose it
don't know why
about to release
the hate inside
for so long
i was happy with life
but the old me is back
and the new me has died
no one can speak a word
to calm my rage
no one can shut
the door to its cage
reborn is the demon
he's vanquished the saint
he's now controlling
this body of hate
Copyright ©
tin
... [
2006-12-03 22:02:29]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: reborn is the demon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:47:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The flow and rhyme are superb. A dark write, it kind of reminds me of ones struggle with depression. How one tries so hard to supress the inner demon from taking control~ You have done a fine job with this write well done and thanks so much for posting it.
warm hugs,
Dreamer~ |
|
|
Re: reborn is the demon
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 02:15:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| The Demon in us is always lurking...watching....and waiting. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
