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Dying
Contributed by
mali
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Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 03:40:36 AM in AEST
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Im shattered into bits
& my soul, has been torn,
from the root it was born from
The form and the state of my heart
Brakes into small shards
Of my broken heart
It falls to the ground
More and more pieces are tore from the sound it makes
When it falls to the ground
My joints pull to the point Where I fall
and cant feel a thing for sure
I have broken my joints
Bits of my life, flash before my eyes
And thrashes of blood cross my eyes
As I die
Im gone, that’s it, I don’t exist anymore
The fire’s lit, I’m tore
Lying on the floor
Copyright ©
mali
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2006-12-03 03:40:36]
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Re: Dying
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 03:52:22 AM AEST
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| I like it like a baby being ran over by a honda civic j/k it's great ver vivid |
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Re: Dying
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 05:00:14 AM AEST
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Very sad but if you was dying I hope you changed your mind.
huggs,
emy |
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