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November the 31st
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 07:23:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Staring out the window
of yet another bus
watching a world go by
a mind, lost, in another time
of when the weather is good
the beach and friends
music, drinks and smiles to go round
a time of her promise of love
- forever
that day
- November the 31st
a day never to come
like the world passing by
of yet another bus
with as much meaning
- as Latin
with as much substance
- as a daydream
to me – just a boy
a strange kid
forgotten like the transit moment
loved like a forgotten parent
with everything to hope for
a love to rely on
with her endless hold
and the start of life
everything starts then
- November the 31st
and not on another bus.
2/12/06
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2006-12-02 07:23:35]
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Re: November the 31st
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 02:54:46 PM AEST
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Good piece of writing, once again. You made me feel as if I was sitting on that bus, with such a lost feeling. Your writes speak volumes.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: November the 31st
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by Alison on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 05:20:41 PM AEST
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| Truly magnificent! Very deep and powerful, lonely and heartbreaking, this write is moving to the point of tears, as though it is the very thoughts of your heart! Wonderful write-sad feelings |
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