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Pondering
Contributed by
lyrical
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Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 01:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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To comment on the current haste
Radidly, hurriedly, incessant pace
Of life and love and currency spent
And friends come and gone
I hold back to relent
Cause I'm too damned slow
I cant move that fast
Wanna sit back and ponder the last moment past
But the present's here now
And the past is blase'
And the future is only a second away
So hurrying now
To keep up with the Jones'
My conscience is buzzing
I ache to the bones
But accomplishments seem
To put salve to the wound
And I hope to be pndering again very soon
Copyright ©
lyrical
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2006-12-01 13:33:23]
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Re: Pondering
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by tearstained_soul on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 02:51:19 PM AEST
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My conscience is buzzing
I ache to the bones
But accomplishments seem
To put salve to the wound
those are my favorite lines of your poem ut the whole thing is very well written. i like your style, keep it up! |
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Re: Pondering
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 03:34:06 AM AEST
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| Truthful and interesting poem nicely done; yes we all should reflect on the past. Without the past there is no future ! Keep pondering. |
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