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I Break in Two
Contributed by
chadbrown
on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 05:55:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I break in two.
Holding your essence,
Above my own.
Unconditional.
For love we atone.
I break in two.
This heart now bleeds,
A deep shade of red.
This heart still aches,
From things left unsaid.
I break in two.
These words spoken,
Through soft lips.
Like daggers piercing,
Like a vampire’s kiss.
I break in two.
Dreams that are flooded,
In this fleeting tear.
To awake every day,
And find your not here.
I break in two,
Over You.
Copyright ©
chadbrown
... [
2006-12-01 05:55:58]
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Re: I Break in Two
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by silver_crested_shadow on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 03:06:53 AM AEST
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| kinda sad poem, and yet i bet there are a bunch of us out there that can relate to the words you have wrote. good job |
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Re: I Break in Two
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:35:07 AM AEST
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| Aw, great poem. I really can relate to what you have said. I like how you wrapped the poem up at the end. Wonderful job. |
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Re: I Break in Two
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 06:56:15 AM AEST
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This was sad. I liked how you ended the poem and I thought that it was really good. I liked all of it.
Take care
Christina |
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