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Thinking of a girl
Contributed by
ClancyExistential
on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:40:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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thinking of a girl
alone in the night,
tangled in between another
thinking of a girl
killing time - thinking
what hour is it?
thinking of a heart I broke,
how many say they're mine
a girl cries for me
emotion can and won't show
a tricky breed a girl I know,
high on something besides me
a girl I know chose better than me
not that I blame her
now alone,
a girl I know turned cold
a woman now
tells me I'm with demons
begs for a poem
I can't help
thinking away from a girl I know,
when does love release it's hold
thinking out of focus,
a girl I can't have
can fill my void
screams for the woman
the woman who broke me
a thousands apologies,
poems, a dead rose,
an empty glass
I can't cope
in this night
cold
without the warmth
far from any girl I know
all alone,
I'm all alone...
thinking of a girl,
a misery deserved...
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2006-12-01 00:40:39]
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Re: Thinking of a girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 01:36:20 AM AEST
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Yes the misery deserved...
OK the misery leaves a fleshy patch where once the heart throbbed.
This piece is 10 gauge
Careful where you point that thing...
Better go hunting soon... basic male advice
An attempt to lighten up after a painfully effective write! Good Job!
Peace In
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Re: Thinking of a girl
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 02:18:47 AM AEST
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A poem laced with pure feeling and emotion.
thinking of a girl a misery deserved, solid, profound.
~Michelle~ |
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