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addiction
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:16:12 PM in AEST
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today
i closed my eyes
only to see you
yesterday
i closed my mind
only to hear your sigh break me again
and tomorrow
tomorrow i'll dream
of lillies held to my lips
tasting of honey licked from your skin
and i'll wonder how to keep this silent intensity of you
within me
.....i couldn't find a proper ending, so that's how it ends for now.......
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SocialMisfit
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2006-11-30 18:16:12]
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Re: addiction
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:54:14 PM AEST
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The endind was as good as the entire poem.
Nice.
Michelle |
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Re: addiction
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by ever1der on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:10:29 AM AEST
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| wow...I love this ..ending was great..it gave the poem a lot of power. |
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