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Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 05:38:09 PM in AEST
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Should ever I fall~
& not regain your side
You've no need to look back~
or falter in stride...
For wherever I am~
I'm always with you
Wherever you go~
I will follow there too...
Whenever you take a chance~
or make a choice
I'll be there helping you~
to hear your own voice...
Whenever to yourself~
you look for whats true
And trust it to exist~
there within you...
you...
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Re: You
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by blindchoice on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:04:37 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this...nice write. |
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Re: You
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:56:31 PM AEST
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Positive uplifting write.
Michelle |
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Re: You
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:14:07 AM AEST
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This is a positive reinforcement write. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:32:56 AM AEST
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Kerry~
Such beautifully ascribed words that lift the spirits. You definately know how to give a person a good pick me up when they need it.
Whenever to yourself~
you look for whats true
And trust it to exist~
there within you...
you...
I like these lines alot. They speak volumes~
Well done dearest Kerry~ Write on MisFit I love your work~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: You
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by tearstained_soul on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 04:18:56 PM AEST
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| short, sweet and to the point loved it!! |
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Re: You
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 10:54:59 PM AEST
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Good strong and uplifting write. Thank you for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: You
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:13:58 PM AEST
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A wonderful mission statement for any mentorship, guidance counselor, or even parents on the throes of their children becoming adults...
Praise for the dedication to each other thank you for shining a light here.
Peace
AJPIII |
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Re: You
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by The_View on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 11:23:49 PM AEST
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| Definitely worth the read. |
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 10:20:16 PM AEST
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very pretty!
you are always there for the person this is about and they are always there for you
there's truth in this poem and its beautiful
:-)
ashley |
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Re: You
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by CuriousitysCat on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 07:27:41 PM AEST
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This poem has proved so very true so far and will remain so for as long as is right, in this case forever [hopefully].
;]
Gracious Seedling,
*YoUr DaUgHtEr* |
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Re: You
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 04:52:43 PM AEST
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I hear alot in this and you my friend was and still are and will always be, a writter who reaches into my soul and leave's a most favorable impression . . .
((((MM))))
welcome back . . .
Ben |
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