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The Sonnet Of Things That Burn Slow.
Contributed by
faiton
on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 03:59:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Here is a story of things that burn slow
Charcoal is one if my learning is right
Coal, coke and bitumen can smoulder all night
In fact carbonised fuels are all that I know.
I guess that a candle or, more rightly, its wick
Will keep a flame blazing for one day or more
But now that I’ve pondered I can’t say I’m sure
If it is the vapours of wax burning quick.
Gases explode in a far more pleasing way
Than the slow sputter sparking of a log fire
A flammable liquid makes a flame higher
Yes slow burners are dull, ignore what I say
The thought has just struck me, I realise at last
I should write a poem on things that burn fast.
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faiton
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2006-11-30 15:59:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Sonnet Of Things That Burn Slow.
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 05:05:37 PM AEST (User
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TeeHee, I like your style...so was that just a tease or can we expect, "Things that burn fast"soon?
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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