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Cold
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 01:05:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Another day is passing,
another sunrise, sunset.
The cold air brings it's chill thru my heart.
The flakes strike the ground in a gentle way,
but they harden my heart with each passing moment.
Another love is gone, she never wanted to wait.
What does it matter anyhow, who really cares?
One more day of loneliness has come,
and the cold burns thru my heart.
I was stupid and selfish thru my days.
Now I sit alone, watching everything pass.
Hope life is better for her now,
cause it only gets worse for me.
Copyright ©
whiteleo1984
... [
2006-11-30 13:05:07]
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Re: Cold
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 01:57:03 PM AEST
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| this is a very interseting poem u got here. i understand this point of view of when your life is gone over one little mistakes. i know how is feels |
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Re: Cold
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by saj on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 03:26:02 PM AEST
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that is very sad i can totaly relate to it as well, which made me understand it more...they say time will heal everything...for the mean time dont let your guilt take the best of you:)...
keep it up
saj, |
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