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Shattering Silence
Contributed by
sunflower
on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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your heart shattering silence
almost steals the full moon's thunder
tonight,
lost in this diamond lit blackness,
i wait for sleep to cradle me,
amid the beauty and pain
of the blanket
i wrap myself in
Copyright ©
sunflower
... [
2003-02-18 15:40:00]
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Re: Shattering Silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 04:08:44 PM AEST
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| this is really good...but i found myself wanting more...any way to make this into a bit longer poem?? |
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Re: Shattering Silence
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by sunflower on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 07:51:04 PM AEST
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thanks for the nice comment, Lia; it's funny
because many times I feel that I get too carried away and my poems just seem to run on! |
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Re: Shattering Silence
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 09:43:20 PM AEST
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| You expressed the feelings perfectly of the pain of waiting .... nice images. Good poem. |
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