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Tomorrow?
Contributed by
Japcan
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Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:18:05 AM in AEST
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I sit here and wonder, what is the reason?
Here, now, this place, with things just begining
Days passing by one into another
Waiting for a sign, that my life will be better.
Don't want to get up today, alone, I am sad
Feeling whats to come may be bad
All around I look, whats going on?
Think to myself you must be strong
Uncertain, confused, dont really know why?
So hard to accept, I break down and cry
Lost in the shadows, my worst fears now start
So many things bringing me down, I got to be smart.
Can't handle whats wrong, weakness takes control, as my eyes swell
Please not this time, let me be well
The feelings not leaving, why isn't it better?
Hoping heaven hears my cry, while my tears get wetter.
Falling into nothing, asleep.....finally night
I'll wake up tomorrow, with things may be right.
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Re: Tomorrow?
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:36:26 AM AEST
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This was a very good poem.. I liked this a lot... I can relate to this... Welcome to YPDC... Hope to read more poems by you...
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Re: Tomorrow?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 12:40:06 PM AEST
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You have a delightful write here. This is a good place to start when your feeling lonely is writing. Nicely done.
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