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everytime
Contributed by
Sparkz16
on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 07:24:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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everytime i hear your name i get this pain
everytime i see your face my heart starts to race
everytime we touch the chills race down and up
everytime we kiss me world spins like a disk
but everytime you leave i cant breathe
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2006-11-30 07:24:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: everytime
(User Rating: 1 ) by trackiller2006 on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:38:15 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful!! I love it! Great job! |
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Re: everytime
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilverDagger on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 07:42:51 AM AEST (User
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Short yet powerful. Keep it up! |
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