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To start a fire
Contributed by
SageofHalo123330
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Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 12:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What does it take
To start a fire?
Once it starts,
How to stoke it higher?
To set something ablaze,
You need an ember.
Two would be perfect,
With enough tender.
With gentle love and care
The fire can grow
The happiness it gives off
Are for only two people to know
Two embers
Are all that’s needed
To make a fire
That can’t go unheeded.
A passion of flame
That the two embers share
So high is the fire
Even the stars fear the flare.
A passion such as this,
What could have started it all
Two small embers, tender,
And with time, in love they fall.
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2006-11-30 00:51:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To start a fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 01:43:41 AM AEST (User
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ahh the fire, the passion of love!
I said it once and i will say it again..your best one yet!
The waiting is over, now the actual love is here! you sealed your heart into this poem!
amazing job! amazing....
another great one :-)
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Re: To start a fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by tearstained_soul on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 03:53:54 PM AEST (User
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that's adorable :) keep up w/ the good poetry, i liked this one |
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