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Demogorgon
Contributed by
R0b
on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 11:04:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Standing atop the ridge.
Staring down upon life.
Wishing a way out.
A way to end this madness.
The horizon dark.
My soul cold.
Feeling my arms go numb.
Hear the approaching storm.
This is when I begin…
Begin to worry,
To doubt,
To feel the burning sensation of...
-HATE-
The feeling comes from someplace…
Somepalce...Else…
A different place…
Somewhere I rarely travel,
But I do know of it…
Oh yes…I know it well…
A dark place,
A disgustingly dark place.
A place where only evil could lurk.
Where nightmares not only come true,
but are born.
Where things are not as they seem.
My stomach knots.
The familiar taste of blood.
Vision blurs.
I hear the voice of...
Rob
11/29/06
Copyright ©
R0b
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2006-11-29 23:04:11]
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Re: Demogorgon
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 03:06:56 PM AEST
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| i think this is an awesome write /// i absolutely love the darkness which pours from the lines "To feel the burning sensation of hate" brilliant! |
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Re: Demogorgon
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 09:53:25 AM AEST
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Hey.. This poem was amazing.. I thought it was beautifully composed and written... The flow was good and I thought that you did a good job.. My favorite part starts from the line:
A place where only evil could lurk.
...and goes from there.. This was amazing.. Seriously I really liked this poem.. I love all of your poems... They are all really good...
Well I love you
take care
Christina
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Re: Demogorgon
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by richcol7522 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 11:36:42 AM AEST
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This was a good poem man, a little different from what I usually read but I really like it. You are just as talented as Christina. Keep it up
Rich |
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