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Mama Take my Hand
Contributed by
MandiLee
on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 04:39:31 PM in AEST
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How could I be such a fool?
So lost in the game
I don't understand
How to play
And win in the end.
What do I do?
Mama take my hand
lead me through this world
Like I'm a child again
Mama take my hand
I need your guidance here
A light of wisdom near.
Someone with the golden touch
To help me through
Mama take my hand
Put a smile on my face
Oh, dear mama, how could
I be so stupid?
Mama please understand
I might be older
And push away
But mama I still
Need that hand
And I still love you.
Copyright ©
MandiLee
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2006-11-29 16:39:31]
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Re: Mama Take my Hand
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 02:54:43 PM AEST
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Mandi-
A very touching and beautiful poem to your mother. Its true, we all need someone to lead us through life when we hit turbulent times. Its always good to know that no matter what happens, we will have someone there to show us the way. And that they will always be here for us. Very beautiful poem.
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Re: Mama Take my Hand
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by saj on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 04:34:18 PM AEST
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| this poem got me into tears as i remembered how bad i needed to talk to my mother at a time i needed her the most and needed her guidance more than anyone , she was the only one i actually broke down in front of...and felt better after ...its weird how in times of weakness we become children again in the arms of our mothers… beautiful write...i loved it:) |
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