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Battle of Two
Contributed by
flamingblade
on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 10:52:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Twin beings
burning in the flame.
One screams
refuses to take the blame.
Another stares
mentally traveling
away from the glares.
Hope is an emotion
long lost to they,
The pain they feel
none could convey.
One sees the light,
and goes out of sight.
The last lays in darkness
and weeps, feels less and less.
The anguish it deals with,
from the other's desertion
Desperately hoping it's a myth,
Having destroyed all it's assertion.
Copyright ©
flamingblade
... [
2006-11-29 10:52:06]
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Re: Battle of Two
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 12:11:12 PM AEST
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Intense and powerful write.
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Re: Battle of Two
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by youngpoet69 on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 04:55:35 PM AEST
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dude this is so weird ....i was jus writing a poem similar to this but mine is about two souls.....and is sorta came out like this one....
but this poem is rad and cool....like it alot |
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Re: Battle of Two
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:37:43 AM AEST
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This was amazing... I can't wait to read more... Great poem..
Take care
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