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You win
Contributed by
Dandy
on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 09:19:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You took everything from me and cast me aside,
Stabbing my Achilles heal with venom you couldn’t hide,
Those two precious souls, our little girl and boy,
You snatched them away, as if they were only a toy,
Gaping wounds of hurt, you gladly leave me to bleed,
As you feast on my bones with your vengeful greed,
My love for them and their love for me, easy for you to discard,
No heart or compassion, proof you are callous and hard,
Whilst you enjoy the rewards of your ill gotten gain,
Until the day I die, the agony I suffer will always remain,
Be glad you have won, and that you continue to make me cry,
As you wallow in your life that has become just a lie.
Copyright ©
Dandy
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2006-11-29 09:19:41]
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Re: You win
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 10:24:23 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: You win
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 12:21:52 PM AEST
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I could not imagine how this would feel.
Your expression of emotion tops the charts within this verse. Well written.
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