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What If I (What Would You Say)
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 07:05:33 AM in AEST
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What if i died.... What would you say?
what if cryied... what would you do?
If i lost it all would you be the same?
when was the time to act, then you knew your facts, you had your chance and you tried to make us mad, now you feel sorry it's no secret why don't you feel it.
What if....?
~The Raven
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Re: What If I (What Would You Say)
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 04:30:49 PM AEST
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This is a sad poem , what if, well what ifs are cautionary and don't ever give an answer. Good write, I will leave an answer poem;
What ifs are ours to use as weapons,
If only! can teach us a lesson,
No loss I have for I don't quit,
Nor in the background will I sit,
The time to act is here and now,
Feel the pain and you will know how,
Don't suffer the feeling, don't be lonely,
Its not what if, it is If Only |
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Re: What If I (What Would You Say)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 06:43:48 PM AEST
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Raven~ a sad poem indeed.
My dear friend JerseySue sums it all up for me~ I hope things get better for you.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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