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Broken Lifeline
Contributed by
books_4gal
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 11:14:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Gone is the spark,
Gone the warmth and the breath,
Gone too, all that by which life is marked;
Taken by an untimely death.
So young a life is ended,
The child of the hearth lies broken.
Taken by another’s careless spending,
Removed from life like a game’s token.
Before her time, before her hour
Light of the family forever darkened.
Now left behind are those so sour,
Listening nightly for her voice they harken.
Gone her gentle spirit,
Gone a life of promise and of hope,
Gone too her life of simple merit;
Taken from those now left to cope.
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books_4gal
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2006-11-28 23:14:39]
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Re: Broken Lifeline
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 11:48:20 PM AEST
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Condolences to the family through your good heart. Every day is a gift each moments is precious and the few moments reading your piece touched my soul. I felt a rush of all those I have lost pass through my life as a fierce wind...
I am rufffled and renewed by your reaching grasp.
Peace
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Re: Broken Lifeline
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 12:20:46 PM AEST
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My heart goes out to you and the family of your friend. I have come to realise when its your friends daughter it stings like it was your own as well. THis breaks my heart.
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Re: Broken Lifeline
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 06:53:03 PM AEST
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Condolences on your loss~ My heart, thoughts and prayers are with you and your friends family~ May the angels of heaven keep her in their care always~
Heartfelt hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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