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Waiting
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:23:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My eyes are like wonders
I wonder why they feel so heavy
I am the waiter so I'm waiting
I know that when you call I will be ready
I've got to find you
For there is no purpose to wait
My heart is not fleeting
No matter what sound my voice may make
Let's invite ourselves in
Sit at a table made for six
My eyes are so heavy
Like the kitchen sink I never fix
Let's talk about the future
Let's talk about it forever
I want to make a season
Let's make it together
It's hard to understand
This is true from time to time
I will be waiting
I will get yours and I will get mine
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-11-28 21:23:25]
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Re: Waiting
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:51:50 PM AEST
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| waiting is soo hard to do and takes so long. It's like the last few seconds of a football game. Seems to take forever. |
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Re: Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 11:05:33 PM AEST
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My eyes are like wonders
I wonder why they feel so heavy
I love the opening! there are a lot of ideas here, maybe being a tad more specific about what you are waiting for might tie it all together. I thought the imagery was great, but I was a tad confused. :) |
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