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Letter to the World
Contributed by
karoody
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Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
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Hello, world,
This is your children speaking-
We love to watch the sky,
With it's bright sun, moon, and stars.
We love to watch the trees and flowers,
With mother nature's creature's running in their shadows.
We love to watch our friends,
Without worrying which side of the road they're from.
If you did not notice,
We love to watch you, too.
Why do you show us hatred and greed?
Why do you show us destruction and death?
Don't you realize we want to hold dear these things we love?
We want to share these things with generations to come.
We want butterflies and birds to trace the skies-
Not bullets and smoke.
Please don't destroy our dreams because of your selfish hatred.
We are still watching...
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-02-18 13:40:00]
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Re: Letter to the World
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 03:59:34 PM AEST
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| what a great point you have made here |
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Re: Letter to the World
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 07:24:19 PM AEST
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Kara, this is terrific!! I lve it..
Jenni |
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Re: Letter to the World
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:48:56 AM AEST
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| How sweet and innocent love towards mother nature you showed in this poem. Truly it reflects the wishes of the purest hearts of children. It is sooo sweet, soo beautiful and a most pleasant write..Dear Kara, I loved this one..its a delightful read.. venkat |
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Re: Letter to the World
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 03:43:39 AM AEST
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Karoody
A lovely sentiment. A lovely poem.
Part of my comment is in a poem I've already writtem "Restrain your parents" but it's a bit flippant.
But the same sentiment runs through a lot of others I've written but none of them crystalised and expressed as well as this |
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Re: Letter to the World
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 10:47:32 AM AEST
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| this poem is BRILLIANT... it is beautiful and well said... |
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Re: Letter to the World
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 04:31:08 PM AEST
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Oh, Kara so simple yet true a very beautiful poem indeed. Way to go.
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: Letter to the World
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 05:43:11 PM AEST
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| how true your poem speaks of the time we live in.. hopefully when our children come to be our world's anger will subside for them |
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