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Tied to the past
Contributed by
blindchoice
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There is a string around my finger,
something to jog my memory when i wnat to remember.
You.
And someday, with time,
that string will beocme untied.
Please.
When it does I'll be ok.
but will you have anything to say?
Thanks.
There is a string around my finger,
something to jog my memory when I want to remmber.
You.
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blindchoice
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2006-11-28 21:21:30]
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Re: Tied to the past
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:56:30 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. It has a few spelling errors, but I really liked the theme. |
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Re: Tied to the past
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by musicXisXlife on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:20:59 AM AEST
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Great. It's really powerful how you just have one word at the end of each stanza, not rhyming, just there.
Keep up the good work. |
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