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Life's Journey
Contributed by
lizabeth283
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to shield you from the world –
To take away your sorrow
Anything to let you know
I’ll love you each tomorrow
I want to tell you how I feel –
When I look into your eyes
A place of safety I can go
Resembling heavens’ skies
I want to spend my life with you –
Through times of thick and thin
As long as you are by my side
There’s nothing we can’t win
I want to make you recognize –
Your heart is made of gold
A son of God, my future spouse
Together ‘til we’re old
Then I will take you by the hand –
In that Celestial realm of glory
To live forever with my love
The perfect end to commence our story
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lizabeth283
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2006-11-28 19:34:19]
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Re: Life's Journey
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by Stellar on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 08:38:07 PM AEST
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| This is a really pretty poem. I've finally been able to open my heart back up to the possibility of that kind of love after having my it broken. The only suggestion I have for the title is to maybe change it to "Love's Journey" instead of life. I don't know if that helps. |
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Re: Life's Journey
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 12:27:28 PM AEST
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Leave it all just as it is Stell is right this is pretty and flowing.
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