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Life
Contributed by
intoxicatingkiss___x
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 06:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a bush,
Covered with beautiful crimson roses,
Each rose symbolises a loved one,
We watch them grow,
Starting as a bud,
Growing into a beautiful rose,
As they grow old,
They wilt and die,
Another bud grows in its place,
Making the beautiful journey of life.
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2006-11-28 18:45:06]
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Re: Life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 08:56:18 PM AEST
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nice contrast with life and the cycle of a rose.
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Re: Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 03:09:41 AM AEST
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I like your source of comparison here. It's short and to the point, but your wording is direct, so there's no need for anything extra!
Thank you for sharing, and welcome to ypdc : )
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