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Dreams
Contributed by
theeman
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:41:37 AM in AEST
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I see these dreams
maybe you see them too
a world with nothing it seams
a world with just me and you
these are my dreams.
[chorus 1]
It's a world with only sky
a world with mountains so high
a world where you can fly
a world where time flys by
these are my dreams.
[chorus1]
I am in a vertigo
cities floating in the sky
everyhing here moves so slow
it's a place where time is infinite
these are my dreams.
[chorus 2]
I see a world with no barriers
a world where people work for each other
a world where people shed no tears
and live their lives for one another
these are my dreams.
[chorus 1]
I see a world with one religion
it's a world without poverty and war
a world without racial discrimination
it's a world for us all
these are my dreams.
[chorus3]
these are the chorus
[chorus1]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
I want to wake up before noon
[chorus2]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
I want to wakeup soon
[chorus3]
which is the dream I don't know
I got to wake up to reality soon
is this a dream then let me go
Oh I woke up ,so soon!
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theeman
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2006-11-28 07:41:37]
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Re: Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:55:47 AM AEST
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It would've been much easier to read if you'd wrote the whole poem/song, instead of poeple having to do this whole fill-in-the-blanks-thing
I'd change that, distracts too much
Other then that, good job
keept it up
with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
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Re: Dreams
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:48:44 PM AEST
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This has the making of a beautiful song..
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