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Not this time
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You know what, I'm not gonna let you re-arrange me.
Your not gonna depress me, suppress me, tie me up in knots.
Not today, not this time.
I have to much life to live, and not enough time to live it.
I have to many friends that love me, and at times not enough love to give them.
So today don't try to re-arrange what you can't control.
Don't depress me with the, pitty me, love me, I need you stories.
Don't try to suppress me keep me at home, and away from the dreams I want to achieve.
Don't tie me up in knots and make me hate you more.
Because today I won't let you and sure as hell not this time.
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cryingonmyporch
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2003-02-18 12:40:00]
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Re: Not this time
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 01:44:16 PM AEST
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Good for you! Way to be strong! Don't ever let anyone bring you down.
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Re: Not this time
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by LJ on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:42:51 PM AEST
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| WoW! This is powerful! Nice write |
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Re: Not this time
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 09:18:34 AM AEST
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| i LOVE this!!! wow, i wish i had seen this poem 5 years ago and commissioned you to send it to my ex... ::smile::... excellent!!! |
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Re: Not this time
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 04:24:02 PM AEST
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I loved this. to me it was more inspirational than angry. I loved your attitude in this one way to go.
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Re: Not this time
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by chantel on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 04:58:00 PM AEST
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way to go about damb time you tell them how it is is this one about mark or about your famley i think it is a little of both but amy you nedded to let your fellings out i love u and i will not let nothing happen if mark trys his *****! but hey this one was a good one
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