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Vampires Visit II
Contributed by
MisfitMe
on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Even unto this day~
with no assurance might I claim
What untrue could of been~
or "reality" without name...
Had I but dreamt of waking~
or awakened unto a dream
Wherein everything was as I knew it~
& yet nothing therein as seemed...
With every true sense I had knowledge of~
this one denied to mere mortal sight
Who said I would be taught how to tremble~
if I but grant unto his touch the right...
To be continued...
Copyright ©
MisfitMe
... [
2006-11-27 22:55:31]
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Re: Vampires Visit II
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 12:28:34 AM AEST
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wow. this is gorgeous!
I adore the language utilised, here.
It is atmospheric and dark.
Awesome. |
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Re: Vampires Visit II
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:50:41 AM AEST
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| ummm beautiful |
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Re: Vampires Visit II
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:30:17 PM AEST
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Ahhh that second stanza, Kerry. Nice and dreamy. Another great write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Vampires Visit II
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 06:56:34 PM AEST
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You go girl! This is awesome. I absolutely love it. You certainly know how to draw in your reader~ Can't wait for the continuation of this fantastic poem. Keep it up Kerry, you're doing a great job!
love n hugs,
Sue M |
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